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　　Zheng Yan

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　　Objective

　　To obtain a challenging position as a software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development.

　　Education

　　1997.9-2000.6 Dept.of Automation,Graduate School of Tsinghua University, M.E.

　　1993.9-1997.7 Dept.of Automation,Beijing Insititute of Technology,B.E.

　　Academic Main Courses

　　Mathematics
　　Advanced Mathematics Probability and Statistics Linear Algebra
　　Engineering Mathematics Numerical Algorithm Operational Algorithm
　　Functional Analysis Linear and Nonlinear Programming
　　Electronics and Computer
　　Circuit Principal Data Structures Digital Electronics
　　Artificial Intelligence Computer Local Area Network

　　Computer Abilitees

　　Skilledin use of MS Frontpage, Win 95/NT, Sun, Javabeans, HTML, CGI, JavaScript, Perl, Visual Interdev, Distributed Objects, CORBA, C, C++, Project 98, Office 97, Rational RequisitePro, Process,Pascal, PL/I and SQL software

　　English Skills

　　Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Past CET-6, TOEFL:623;GRE:2213

　　Scholarships and Awards

　　1999.3 Guanghua First-class Scholarship for graduate

　　1998.11 Metal Machining Practice Award

　　1997.4 Academic Progress Award

　　Qualifications

　　General business knowledge relating to financial, healthcare

　　Have a passion for the Internet, and an abundance of common sense

　　·面試沖刺攻略逐一數(shù)
　　·外企面試:要了解外國(guó)文化
　　·談薪:四個(gè)參照系數(shù)是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
　　·面試前如何確定資薪期望?
　　·面試成功的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)
　　·英語面試常問題庫(kù)
　　·經(jīng)典面試思路讓你輕松過關(guān)
　　·面試官怎樣進(jìn)行面試攻防戰(zhàn)
　　·面試的技巧:重要的30分鐘
　　·面試:應(yīng)聘者注意著裝色
　　·面試的三大紀(jì)律八項(xiàng)注意 ·面試場(chǎng)上的十大成功絕招 ·面試十大必考題大曝光
　　·不要放棄你在面試中的權(quán)利
　　·十八則面試的禁口話題
　　·當(dāng)菜鳥遭遇骨灰級(jí)面試官

　　http://www.pconline.com.cn/pcjob/2003jianli/

中專啊 呵呵 還金融 估計(jì)啥都沒學(xué)到吧 中專還說英文 別費(fèi)事啦 光會(huì)自我介紹有什么用啊 有意思 背幾個(gè)單詞而已

為什么你喜歡英語,卻又為什么還需要跪求英文自我介紹呢?
不過我覺的你的條件也還是不錯(cuò)的,要對(duì)自己有信心,每個(gè)人,干每一件事都有第一次OK

說別人給的 太假了 人家要是問你幾句 看你什么不會(huì)怎么辦啊 主要是要自然 還是展示一下自己真正的水平吧 我剛找到工作 人家叫你英文介紹 也許不是想看看你的英文水平怎么樣 因?yàn)檎l都可以背出來一篇英文介紹 可能看的是你的 反應(yīng) 態(tài)度 等等 因?yàn)槲业挠⑽牟缓?人家叫我紹
我就說了兩句 就不知道說什么了 但我還是被錄取了

My English is poor!

I am what I am!

然后用漢語說吧！

my name is XXX （如過是foreigner你可加句 you can call me XXX as my english name 老外記你中文名就像你記他們英文名一樣郁悶 ）my hometown is XXX the capital of XXX province
I m graduate from XXXX university or college and major in XXX
i m interest in foreign trade and have every confidence in myself to make this job well therefore I extremely want to join you (get this job) I hope you can give me one chance. thanks

背過的英語介紹，有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的hr一聽就知道。
而且背過的，到時(shí)候一緊張就忘記了。
建議你不會(huì)就是不會(huì)，實(shí)話給hr說。當(dāng)然要委婉的解釋一下。

我以前就背過，很糗，經(jīng)驗(yàn)之談

首先應(yīng)該搞清楚自己比較適合哪種說話方式，是超短句還是復(fù)雜的從句——盡量適中，但是連接詞盡可能豐富一些，把可以表現(xiàn)自己個(gè)性的一面的詞語揀出來背一背，外企是注重個(gè)性的。
問什么問題，還是多在自己的專業(yè)知識(shí)上下功夫，不同的專業(yè)各不相同。有時(shí)會(huì)問為什么要選擇這家企業(yè)而不是......這時(shí)就看你對(duì)這家公司了解多少了。
轉(zhuǎn)移危機(jī)的能力是需要練習(xí)的，必須放松自己，態(tài)度端正，隨時(shí)保持傾聽的狀態(tài)，才會(huì)獲得考官的好感。
英文的自我介紹不只考察語言能力，還會(huì)測(cè)驗(yàn)?zāi)愕膽B(tài)度，應(yīng)變力，以及品質(zhì)，不能強(qiáng)求自己在面試中保持一種虛假的禮貌——如果放松實(shí)在太不容易，可能是今天狀態(tài)不太好，那就沒辦法了

Little tips to you, When you interview don't said any other company don't want you, don't said you want on diet ,and don't said your company have good treatment too, 小建議，不要說其它公司不收錄你，不要說你也想減肥，不要說這裹福利好，也不用說家裹有多少人，他們才不管呢! 在美國(guó)你一定否決了。 。
My name is XXX, I‘m 20 year old,i came from chonqing,and i graduation at Xindu Medical School, and professional Training Program.
Why?
Because i interest in this industry, and i can seen many changes in this organization.
因?yàn)槲矣信d趣在這行業(yè)，同可見這行業(yè)有發(fā)展企業(yè)空間。

My name is XXX
I twenty years old
I graduate form Xindu Medical School
I was studying nursing profession.
But I am unfortunately not admitted to nursing job card
Home with my father, mother and younger sister
I hope very much to work in your company.

ask:why you will choose our company?
answer:Good treatment of your company, and I would also like to take this opportunity to lose weight.

....照著你的要求弄的....一句對(duì)應(yīng)一句..

既然英語不好，就越簡(jiǎn)單越好吧
my name is 20.i'm 20 years old,i come from chongqing XX university,i'm looking forward to working in your company.
Q；Why?
A:because of good treatment in your company, and I would also like to take this opportunity to lose weight.

你好！
不需要的，機(jī)票銷售很簡(jiǎn)單，一般用的etme系統(tǒng)，三天能上手，我就是旅行社的，最后預(yù)祝你成功
希望對(duì)你有所幫助，望采納。

不會(huì)，旅行社招的機(jī)票銷售面試只要中文自我介紹，這個(gè)崗位要求不高的，應(yīng)屆生可以，有戲。不要帶勞動(dòng)手冊(cè)，上海只要帶個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷還有畢業(yè)證書就可以了。